1st Draft

This is the first draft, half way through completion. It follows my narrative up to 34 seconds. From the previous draft I had published on here was quite basic and empty. I put in more pictures and edited in more footage that I thought I had lost. As you can see from the first draft I had changed the colour of the font from red to purple to keep the continuity of purple through out my product of trailer, front cover and poster.

In one of my footage; of the girl screaming, I didn't like the lighting which I would like to re film again if i have time. So in the mean time I just used Final Cut Pro filter called Hue/Saturation as it looks vintage and dark but in the future I will manage my lighting the way I way I want it to be shown on screen as I will achieve in giving the right connotations of horror. Another change that I have made in my narrative is the baby part, because I can't arrange a baby instead I just used a black screen with a voice over on top with a baby crying to make it realistic as possible as when babies are born they are heard crying at first.

This draft might not make sense that is because I sill have some footage to film and edit.