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This was my first attempt at writing up an advert for college students to read. Until I got told that it was boring and the audience will loose interest by reading the first sentence, I started to change it up to make it more appealing.

This was the finished and improved advert. I made it short and snappy. Got rid of the list because I didn't want anyone to feel intimidated and loose interest. Made the font bigger and gave useful information such as my email. Also the theme of this advert is black, orange and white to link with my genre.

This is a screenshot of the email I had sent to the technician. I had to send him the advertisement, due technical difficulties I wasn't allowed to send an email to all students with an attachment as it ruins the systems.

These two emails were sent to the staffs who deal with tutor notices.